Narrative Lock Sprint (1:1)
Get a clear plan.
Fix the story.
Increase investor replies.
A 90-minute working session plus a 2-week follow-up to
lock your fundraising narrative,
rewrite your pitch deck outline,
and build an investor targeting hypothesis,
so your deck converts to real investor meetings.
Live 90 minutes • 2-week follow-up review • $849
Who this is for
This sprint is for founders who:
already have a deck (or a rough draft)
are getting “not a fit,” silence, or low-quality meetings
need clarity and direction fast
want an ex-VC to tell them what’s actually broken
What happens in the 90 minutes
In the live session, we will:
lock your narrative spine (what investors must understand fast)
fix your “Why now” and positioning
decide what traction proof matters for your stage
outline the deck so every slide earns its place
build the targeting hypothesis: who to pitch and why
Deliverables
You leave with:
Rewritten deck outline (slide-by-slide priorities)
Narrative summary (your story in 6–8 sentences)
Check on Ask and Uses of funds vs Financial model
Pitch preparation for a 5 min pitch
Most frequent investor questions (and how to answer)
Investor targeting hypothesis (who to target + why)
2-week follow-ups of your updated deck/outline
What this is NOT
This is not a design makeover.
It’s strategic and narrative work that fixes conversion.
If you want a full deck build + outreach system, apply for BUILD or VIP.
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You’ll receive:
1. a narrative spine (the core story VCs need)
2. a rewritten pitch deck outline (slide-by-slide priorities)
3. an investor targeting hypothesis (who to pitch + why)
4. a 2-week follow-up review after you implement changes
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You can still do the Sprint. We’ll build your narrative spine and slide outline from scratch so you can create a VC-ready deck faster and avoid wasted iterations.
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This is not design work. It’s narrative and strategy: story clarity, slide priorities, targeting logic, and meeting conversion. If you need full build support, apply for BUILD or VIP.
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Send whatever you have: deck draft, notes, traction metrics, product overview, and any investor feedback. If you’re early, we’ll use validation and proof points instead of revenue.
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Usually within 1–2 weeks depending on calendar availability. If you’re on a tight runway, mention it when booking and we’ll prioritize if possible.
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No. What I can do is materially improve what you control: deck narrative, targeting, outreach messaging, and pitch readiness—so you get higher-quality meetings and clearer investor responses.
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Sometimes, where there’s strong fit (stage/traction/thesis). Intros are never guaranteed. The goal is to make your story convert in any investor conversation.
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Reschedules are allowed with 24 notice. Because time is reserved and preparation is involved, refunds are typically not offered once a session is booked inside the notice window.