Lock Your Narrative in 90 Minutes
One focused session. We find what’s not landing, fix the story, and rebuild your deck in real time.
Most founders figure this out after 10+ investor meetings.
We do it in one session.
$849
Your Deck Isn't Telling Your Story
Most founders know their company inside out but can't articulate it in 10 slides. The result: VCs close the deck before they ever get to your traction.
WHAT VCS SEE NOW
Jargon-heavy descriptions that don't explain what you actually do. Traction buried on slide 11. A $50B TAM from Google. "We have no competition." A vague ask. No milestones. Mission statements nobody asked for.
WHAT VCS SEE AFTER THE SPRINT
A clear one-sentence description. Traction front and center by slide 4. Bottom-up market math. An honest competition table. A specific ask with milestones. A story that makes the VC want to forward your deck.
What You Get in 90 Minutes
This is not a review where I email you notes. We work together in real time. I share my screen, we rebuild your deck live, and you leave with a clear, rewritten deck and a story that works.
Narrative Teardown & Rebuild
I go through your deck slide by slide and tell you exactly what a VC is thinking at each one. Then we rebuild the story structure together — what goes where, what gets cut, what's missing. You leave with a narrative that flows.
Slide-Level Copy Edits
We rewrite the actual words on your slides. Headlines, descriptions, metric callouts, your ask. Not vague feedback like "make this clearer" — we write it together, on the call.
Traction Positioning
Most founders undersell their traction or bury it. I'll show you which numbers to lead with, how to frame early-stage metrics, and where they need to live in the deck to pass the 90-second scan.
Market Sizing Math
We build your bottom-up TAM together on the call. No more Statista screenshots. You'll have a defensible market number that shows VCs you've done the work.
VC Target List Strategy
I'll tell you which types of investors to target based on your stage, sector, and geography. Who to approach, how to find them, and what order to reach out. You leave with a targeting framework, not just a deck.
How It Works
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Pick a time that works. Send me your current deck (or what you have so far) at least 24 hours before our session so I come prepared.
Book & Send Your Deck
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90-Minute Live Session
We meet on Zoom. I share my screen, walk through your deck as a VC would, and we rebuild it together in real time. You talk, I type. We go slide by slide.
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You Leave Ready to Send
By the end of the session, your narrative is locked, your slides have been rewritten, and you have a clear plan for who to send it to. You get the written notes within 24 hours.
Typical deck consultants
Send you a PDF of notes after reviewing
Generic feedback: "make it more concise"
Multiple rounds over 2-4 weeks
Focus on making slides pretty
Never sat in the room where decisions are made
$2,000-$5,000 for iterative reviews
Why The Sprint vs. Other options
The Narrative Lock Sprint
We rebuild your deck live, together, on screen
Specific rewrites: "change this line to this"
Done in one 90-minute session
Focus on the story VCs need to hear
Built by someone who made the funding decisions
$849, one session, satisfaction guaranteed
This is For You If:
✅ You have a deck but it's not getting responses
✅ You've gotten vague feedback and don't know what to fix
✅ You're pre-seed or seed stage
✅ You're about to start fundraising and want to get it right the first time
✅ You want direct, honest feedback from someone who's been on the other side
✅ You'd rather fix it in 90 minutes than iterate for 3 months
This is Not For You If:
You don’t have a draft deck yet
You’d like to take a few months to fix the deck
You're still figuring out the core idea
You need someone to build the full raise for you
Need More Than a Sprint?
If you want hands-on help building your full raise — deck, investor list, and outreach — Full Build may be a better fit.
Founders Who Locked Their Story
“Vicki completely restructured our story. We went from zero responses to 8 meetings in 5 weeks.”
A.M. - Seed stage founder, Edtech, $1.2M raised
“In 3 months of pitching we received an offer and got acquired. Highly recommend Vicki.”
P.P. - Pre-seed stage founder, Mental health, Acquired by Series B Competitor
“Vicki knows exactly what VCs want to see.”
K.S. - Seed stage founder, Sports tech, $2.2M raised
“We were very fortunate to work with Vicki. Getting acquired would not have happened without her.”
P.B. - Pre-seed stage founder, Nuclear tech, Acquired by listed company
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That works. Bring your idea, your notes, or even just a rough outline. We'll build the narrative structure from scratch and you'll leave with a clear slide-by-slide plan to execute.
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This is not design work. It’s narrative and strategy: story clarity, slide priorities, targeting logic, and meeting conversion. If you need full build support, apply for BUILD or VIP.
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Send whatever you have: deck draft, notes, traction metrics, product overview, and any investor feedback. If you’re early, we’ll use validation and proof points instead of revenue.
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Usually within 1–2 weeks depending on calendar availability. If you’re on a tight runway, mention it when booking and we’ll prioritize if possible.
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No. What I can do is materially improve what you control: deck narrative, targeting, outreach messaging, and pitch readiness—so you get higher-quality meetings and clearer investor responses.
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Sometimes, where there’s strong fit (stage/traction/thesis). Intros are never guaranteed. The goal is to make your story convert in any investor conversation.
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Reschedules are allowed with 24 notice. Because time is reserved and preparation is involved, refunds are typically not offered once a session is booked inside the notice window.
Stop Iterating. Lock It
90 minutes. One session. A deck that works
Most founders book this right before starting investor outreach.